within the book, within a mind,
a word, a rhythm exposes
dancing universes between the eyes
seeking freedom from the skull confines.
Thank you for reading!
-Alina
Writer in San Francisco, CA
within the book, within a mind,
a word, a rhythm exposes
dancing universes between the eyes
seeking freedom from the skull confines.
Thank you for reading!
-Alina
golden eyes glower,
dreaming of darkened nights
during day time. A heartache turned
sour, inspiring visions of violence,
and a disastrous summer.
Thank you for reading!
-Alina
The dreams of the night,
alive in the cold spaces
between us, fill the unknown
holes that have grown,
and will continue to.
alive with blood.
My high, giving you
a rise, up into
glittering sickly skies.
A pathway towards
oblivion,
we already know
the consequences.
Thank you for reading!
-Alina
Since I haven’t seen or read any drafts of my book the past three weeks, I’m surprised by how much I remember, how much I can almost recite line by line as I look over it. Did I miss my characters? Yes. Now that they’re back in my hands I want to expand and fill in the bare bones of my rough draft. Just in these first 30 pages, I’ve noticed how stripped it is, how it needs filling and fleshing out, which would help to make it more swallowable and enjoyable for readers. Of course, I’m not here to please, I’m here to write but I can see what I need to do and I’m ready to get started.
What I want to do going into my 3rd rough draft: expand and fill in necessary chapters/dialogue/scenes, rearrange a few chapters (their placement), and polish off my ending.
At first, I had about four to six different endings for my book. I wrote and rewrote from different perspectives but I cut all of that out in my second draft. I know I need a more solid ending, or at least one final chapter that doesn’t necessarily wrap everything up but most likely leaves questions and a few complications. Knowing that I still need to write a final chapter has brought me to the unsettling realization that there is more to be written, the story goes on and I can sense that my characters have more to say and do. This means that there will be a second book at some point, but I’m not even going to start thinking about that. I just need to finish this first one and then I’ll move on.
Besides my book, this week was eventful, I went out of town with my partner for a short vacation. It was good to have a brief change of scenery and some much needed alone time together. I came home yesterday and spent the day resting, now starting my work week I feel fully rested and ready to get stuff done.
What I’m reading:
Goodreads ‘currently-reading‘
What I’m listening to:
My Spotify Discover Weekly Playlist
Thank you for reading!
-Alina